The left shoulder looks good I think. But I second Posaune´s post, the shoulder dart is a bit too high. It should be lower. The tip should be positioned at the most protruding point of the shoulder blade:
Put your right index finger at the edge of your left shoulder and run backwards towards the CB along the upper ridge of your shoulder blade. You can feel, where the most protruding point of the shoulder blade is located. This is the point, where the dart should aim to.
I've also thought that the dart was too high. If I were to place it at the most protruding point of the shoulder blade, I would have to drop it ~6cm. I'll do that tomorrow and repost pics.